I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Connor it is great to see that you are thinking about the People Powers and ways you can "Be There." What are some other ways you could show us the People Power "Be there"?
My favourite part is when you help the person that has been shot Did you think about it by yourself. Next time, you could show you helping him up. You could add another pikathor Where is the gun that shot him. Why did he get shot. Wold you want me to coment on a nother one off yuor post.
My favourite part is when you help the person that has been shot Did you think about it by yourself. Next time, you could show you helping him up. You could add another pikathor Where is the gun that shot him. Why did he get shot. Wold you want me to coment on a nother one off yuor post.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Connor it is great to see that you are thinking about the People Powers and ways you can "Be There." What are some other ways you could show us the People Power "Be there"?
ReplyDeleteMy favourite part is when you help the person that has been shot
ReplyDeleteDid you think about it by yourself.
Next time, you could show you helping him up. You could add another pikathor
Where is the gun that shot him. Why did he get shot. Wold you want me to coment on a nother one off yuor post.
My favourite part is when you help the person that has been shot
ReplyDeleteDid you think about it by yourself.
Next time, you could show you helping him up. You could add another pikathor
Where is the gun that shot him. Why did he get shot. Wold you want me to coment on a nother one off yuor post.
He did not not shot he fell over.
ReplyDeleteFabulous work connor
ReplyDeletehi connor its Emma.N I like your blog
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