I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi I'm Caleb from St Bernadette's School. I liked that you put effort into the story and it was unique. You should check you spelling next time. I might try making a Storybird story too.
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Hi I'm Caleb from St Bernadette's School. I liked that you put effort into the story and it was unique. You should check you spelling next time. I might try making a Storybird story too.
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